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“Some Sentences in a Passage in American Literature”

Report of Eli Siegel’s Lecture of January 9, 1976

 

by Alan Shapiro

 

containing discussions of works by Walt Whitman, Edith Wharton, Santayana and more

 

            The lecture I am reporting on was originally given by Eli Siegel January 9, 1976, and he titled it, “Sentences in a Passage in American Literature.”  He began this rich talk by saying he would discuss “the matter of what beauty is, and how it is, and why it is the oneness of opposites.”  With scholarly ease, and often with humor, Mr. Siegel looked at many instances of American poetry and prose and showed their beauty or goodness arose from the way opposites are one in them.  I was moved hearing this lecture, and I'm proud to be giving this report.  Studying in the professional classes taught by Ellen Reiss, I am receiving the widest, most cultural education—and having the time of my life!

Mr. Siegel looked first at Whitman’s long poem, “Starting from Paumanok” (an early name for Long Island), reading one sentence, which is, amazingly, 17 lines of the poem.  “It is a sentence,” he said, “with the earliest cause of beauty: many seen as one, or many becoming one.”  And I was excited when he said this is like composition in music.  Whenever there is composition, he explained, whether in literature, painting, or music, many things work together for one purpose.  Here is the sentence: 

 

O for all that, I am yet of you, unseen, this hour, with irrepressible love,

Walking New England, a friend, a traveler,

Splashing my bare feet in the edge of the summer ripples, on Paumanok’s sands,

Crossing the prairies—dwelling again in Chicago—dwelling in every town,

Observing shows, births, improvements, structures, arts,

Listening to the orators and the oratresses in public halls,

Of and through The States, as during life—each man and woman my neighbor,

The Louisianian, the Georgian, as near to me, and I as near to him and her,

The Mississippian and Arkansian yet with me—and I yet with any of them;

Yet upon the plains west of the spinal river—yet in my house of adobie,

Yet returning eastward—yet in the Sea-Side State, or in Maryland,

Yet Kanadian, cheerily braving the winter—the snow and ice welcome to me,

Yet a true son either of Maine, or of the Granite State, or of the Narragansett Bay State, or of the Empire State;

Yet sailing to other shores to annex the same—yet welcoming every new brother;

Hereby applying these leaves to the new ones, from the hour they unite with the old ones;

Coming among the new ones myself, to be their companion and equal—coming personally to you now;

Enjoining you to acts, characters, spectacles, with me.

 

Said Mr. Siegel:

 

[It is] not the greatest of Whitman.  It can be called a whirl… [However,] if you’ve listened, you’ve been to many places and done many things…  This is one of the places where manyness is oneness…  And the question is, When that occurs, does something like beauty occur?  There is something like beauty in these lines…  The enthusiasm is impetuous, madly circular....This is all one sentence and you are tossed around...but I think it's all to the good. 

            We were seeing—technically—what this particular sentence says about beauty as such.  Continuing, Mr. Siegel looked at more sentences in Whitman's poetry, one by the 19th century writer Lafcadio Hearn, and two about Emily Dickinson.  He showed how opposites—including rest and motion, space and matter, sameness and difference, contraction and expansion—were beautifully one in them.  And throughout, he related the beauty of these sentences to that of other arts, including painting, photography, and the cinema.  For example, there is this sentence by Robert Shafer, editor of the book American Literature, which was the text for this class, about Emily Dickinson, whom Mr. Siegel called “the Amherst recluse and angel,” who was “so much like Whitman and so much unlike [him]:”

 

“Henceforth she lived more and more secluded, and after her father’s death in 1874 she never even left the house save, in the evening, to water her plants, set just outside the porch in summer.”

 

This is “like Nelson going on the deck of the Victory and then [returning to his cabin,]” said Mr. Siegel.  “There is motion here in tidiness.  We have size in beauty, smallness in largeness.”  These opposites, he said, are important in American art, as there are big wall paintings and miniatures. And he added “the miniatures seem to be winning.”

Central in this lecture was a discussion of a story of 1898 by Edith Wharton, titled “The Pelican," a bird, Mr. Siegel noted "who is thought to have given her blood to save her children.”  And he said, “This is one of the important stories about a mother, [and] should be known…  The humor is quite good.”            Miss Wharton “uses expansive metaphors quite carefully,” he continued.  Often she compares “two things… which you don’t expect to have compared.”  For example, there is this keen and satirical sentence at the beginning of the story, about the mother, Mrs. Amyot:

“For the dear lady was providentially deficient in humor: the least hint of the real thing clouded her lovely eye like the hovering shadow of an algebraic problem.”

            Mrs. Amyot is a widow whose husband died soon after the birth of their child.  To support her son, she gives drawing room lectures, which Mr. Siegel said, were quite popular in the 1890s.  And he read this sentence about one particular lecture:

 

“The subject of the discourse (I think it proved to be on Ruskin) was clearly of minor importance, not only to my friend, but to the throng of well-dressed and absent-minded ladies who rustled in late, dropped their muffs and pocket-books, and undisguisedly lost themselves in the study of each other's apparel.”

 

Mr. Siegel commented:

 

In American literature, the severest critics of women are [of] the same sex.  It has always been that way….[Miss Wharton] shows that women can write with satire and neatness.

And about the beauty of her sentences he said:

 

One thing in [prose]… is to relate two adjectives that are unrelated [like] “well-dressed” and “absent-minded”….[It’s like saying] he was touchy and rich, [or] he was elegant, yet archaic.

And he added, "What are you going to do with that?"                                                           

            Looking at many sentences in the story, he showed that Edith Wharton’s metaphors and similes put together the opposites of sameness and difference in a way that makes "us feel the world in a new and vivid way."

            Like others in the class, I was gripped as Mr. Siegel read almost the entire conclusion of the story.  The boy, Lancelot, is now a grown man, successful, with children of his own.  After many years, he has finally come to hear his mother lecture.  Before her talk, he happens to meet the narrator, who has known his mother for years.  And as they are waiting, they overhear several women saying they buy tickets for Mrs. Amyot’s lectures out of pity, because she needs the money to support her son.  Hearing this, Lancelot is furious, and after the lecture he brings the narrator to see his mother, and confronts her.  He is humiliated, afraid she has been, as he says, “making us both the laughing-stock of every place you go!”  He tells her:

 

This gentleman says he knows all about you and I mean him to know all about me too.  I don’t mean that he or anybody else under this roof shall go on thinking for another twenty-four hours that a cent of their money has ever gone into my pockets since I was old enough to shift for myself.  And he shan’t leave this room till you’ve made that clear to him.

“This is one of the important son and mother confrontations in literature,” said Mr. Siegel said.  The way he discussed this story had me see how important Edith Wharton's style and perception is.  As a man who once had the unfortunate and very representative belief that men were simply superior to women, including my own mother who happens to be a college professor, I'm grateful for the new, large respect for women Aesthetic Realism has encouraged in me, and this includes very much the woman to whom I'm happily married, Leila Rosen, who is a high school teacher of English. 

            Turning to writing so different from that of Edith Wharton, Mr. Siegel discussed passages in the Shafer book by the important philosopher George Santayana, who lived from 1863 to 1952.  Santayana writes disparagingly about his own poetry:

 

Of impassioned tenderness or Dionysiac frenzy I have nothing, nor even that magic and pregnancy of phrase—really the creation of a fresh idiom—which marks the high lights of poetry.

“All beauty,” Mr. Siegel commented,

 

can be said definitely to be a oneness of calm and impetuosity, rest and motion, serenity and gusto, lucidity and disorder…  So, in a most urbane way, Mr. Santayana says he doesn’t have the ingredients of poetry.  He says it so decoratively, you forget what he’s saying.

            Then, in a way that moved me very much, Mr. Siegel explained what has to be in order for poetry to be.  And as he did, the opposites were there.  “There are a few things that poetry needs,” he said:

 

One, that there be some feeling there.  You can’t be indifferent…and write a poem… .The next thing…is music….The exact expression of the feeling would make for a kind of music…The next thing is…it would have to be personal, …and in order for it to be poetry, there has to be the impersonal, too….There is something universal and something idiomatic in poetry.  It is the universe peering at you through definite eyes.

 

I feel these sentences are beautiful, in both their style and meaning.                                 

            “The fight between the tiger and the maker of syllogisms, the maker of long sentences,” Mr. Siegel continued, “is all throughout Santayana’s work.”  I loved hearing this!  The tiger and the maker of syllogisms have to do with passion and control, emotion and logic, opposites that have fought in me, and I thought they could never go together.  I learned from Aesthetic Realism, beginning in classes by Edward Green at the Manhattan School of Music, that this fight is resolved in music, including the music I love and play: jazz.  In another lecture Mr. Siegel said the motto of jazz is “Professor Tiger.”

            Santayana’s philosophy, Mr. Siegel continued, is: the world is senseless, but man can give it sense through his perception.  This, he said:

is the problem that philosophy has to face: although the world [can seem] senseless, it can create creatures who come to calculus [and] grammatical sentences…[and] can study the proportion of a vase…. [The question is,] does man, in being fond of order,… get this desire just from himself,…or is he encouraged a bit by this chaos which produced him?

            And to show that the sentences which have lived in American literature are always a oneness of passion and logic, intensity and control, something sensible and something which can seem almost senseless, Mr. Siegel read a brief passage from Herman Melville’s novel Moby Dick, in which Captain Ahab tells the men on the ship of his determination to get the White Whale:

 

Aye, aye! And I’ll chase him round Good Hope, and round the Horn, and round the Norway Maelstrom, and round perdition’s flames before I give him up.  And this is what ye have shipped for, men!  To chase that white whale on both sides of land, and over all sides of earth….

            The oneness of passion and control Mr. Siegel was showing are in great American sentences, he himself had in this talk.

It is the honor of my life to hear him lecture, hear him talk about poetry and all the arts, about people, history, ethics, and more, with his unsurpassed knowledge and feeling.